Suburban Kvetch

8 Comments/Replies to “Shoe shopping haiku ”

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   By angie on Jul 7, 2009

   That is wonderful! And you carried the image through all three lines. Kudos. Submit it somewhere.

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   By SuburbanKvetch on Jul 7, 2009

   I’m glad you like it, Angie. Submit a haiku? Hmmm…do tell!

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   By Melanie on Jul 7, 2009

   LOL! I bought new shoes last week and stupid me wore them — without socks — for the rest of the day. My blisters are ALMOST healed.

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   By debbie on Jul 7, 2009

   Now that is a haiku even I can understand!

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   By MindyMom on Jul 8, 2009

   Nicely done!

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   By Sarah on Jul 8, 2009

   So very true - most of time.
   You are so talented.I love this poem. Thank you.

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   By Melissa on Jul 8, 2009

   I love it!

   And I dont buy cheap shoes just for that reason! My puppies deserve better anyway, they get me where I need to be!

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   By Sarah on Jul 9, 2009

   Read it again today and this is very good.

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